Rattles Like A Train
pack of wolves –
came and found me
hunted me,
and found me in the woods
devoured my ego –
like sweet tasty food
what can i do –
except find hope –
in places –
where hunting knives rule
where the sun dance –
is tepid and cool
pack of wolves –
came and found me
counting out its ill gotten gains
as i minuted –
all the stresses and strain
and i worked hard,
always hoping for the grain
but those hungry wolves
they love my brain
and it is mental un-wellness –
that rattles like a train
i am loose when it comes to hinges
and the nature of my ego frame
James Garratt – Thursday 11th May 2023
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Rattles Like A Train – Written Thursday 11th May 2023 (Aged 48)

Love (!!) the imagery! A very interesting combination.
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Thank you. I liked the idea of a train hurtling along. Feels very much like how I think and process or not process 🙂
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It is a great image. 🙂
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🙂
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